Ever wondered what a poetry workshop was like? I’ve always wanted to attend one, so gave myself an early birthday present and signed up for one. It involved four ninety-minute phone sessions with ten participants and a leader from California, who is a published poet. Members in the group were all females and ranged from amateurs like me to published poets.
Our classes usually included the poet reading us one or more of her poems, pointing out a poetic device or giving some other resources and then us writing for a few minutes on a prompt she gave us and then sharing our fragment if we wanted to.
For example, the first prompt was: “what word are you holding” and I wrote:
February 3
The male cardinal repeats his song
announcing his territory a month early.
Will he hear one word from a lady
to give him hope?
Then “homework” is assigned. The first weeks was “If Sidewalks Had Ears” and my poem was:
If Sidewalks Had Ears: 401 Water Street
I’m just a sidewalk; I bar none but hear all.
In the morning, I hear a hose cleaning me up for another day.
Many young feet tramp over me to class and hustle back home to get on with life.
In the evening, groups chatter over me as they hurry to enter the building.
Later some stagger home alone or in pairs.
A few disgorge their sorrows and leave me
waiting for the sound of the morning hosing down.
I’m just the humble patch of concrete in front of the Pioneer Bar.
The poem for the second week was about tall ships, but contained the line “The wind is now”. Based on an encounter with a friend with aphasia, I wrote:
“The Wind Is Now”
It’s a cruel wind that blows her words away.
She used to teach; now she struggles to state basic needs.
It’s a warm wind that blows friends in to embrace and remember out loud the good times.
It’s a soft wind that says: “I will carry you toward a new now
Where the spirit reminds us all that we are each a breath from God.”
The amazingly wonderful part of the workshop for me was to hear all the different directions people took for their writing from the same poem or fragment.
Just for fun for the next homework prompt, “If the Rain Knew My Secrets”, I wrote a haiku and then asked CHATGPT to do so.
I like his better.
“If the Rain Knew My Secrets”
Mine:
Sorrow poured from sky
Dumping big and small secrets
Cleansing memory.
ChatGPT’s:
Rain whispers softly,
Echoes secrets in its fall,
Nature’s confidant.
At the third workshop, to the prompt “If you lose a memory, embroider a new one to take its place”, I wrote:
What did we talk about the last time I visited you?
The memory may be gone from both our minds.
but the warmth of the greeting and the joy of being together
Embroider a picture of a black Lab lying on his back in a patch of sun.
For the last week’s in-class exercise, our leader talked about using metaphors and then had us write as many metaphors as we could in five minutes for a common object. I did
What is a cup?
A holder of morning energy and evening comfort
A paper weight
A maker of statements
A dust catcher
A hand-warmer.
Others in the group waxed much more poetic on this exercise. I left the workshop emboldened to find a critique group or another workshop. Of course I’ll read more poetry, starting with Dogku by Andrew Clements.